Author Topic: Attention: Learn About Our Suffering  (Read 555 times)

TheQuirk

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Attention: Learn About Our Suffering
« on: 14 September 2003, 20:55 »
Seeing as how I'm a badass goth who wears black and cries all the time, I decided to start this fun little game: write the most horrible, angsty poetry you can come up with.

I will begin:

My life recoils in horror,
For my blood spills,
Because the DEVIL IS GREAT.
Maybe I will cut myself with some razors,
Because being a goth is kewl.

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« Reply #1 on: 14 September 2003, 20:59 »

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« Reply #2 on: 14 September 2003, 21:10 »
Roses are black.
Violets are black.
All my life is worth jack.
I run through the forest of despair.
Leaves of anger fall through my hair.
I haven't a good line to end this poem.
So let's party down with a gnome.

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« Reply #3 on: 14 September 2003, 21:19 »
I like to drink Drano
I like to drink bleach
I like to watch teenage comedy-horror
and think that it's good

I like to cut myself
I like to hurt myself
I like to eat lye and drink keroseine
And think it's delicious

I like wearing black
And white face paint
Eyeshadow is cool
Just like black nail polish

I like black and black and black and black
Go the fuck ~

Pissed_Macman

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« Reply #4 on: 14 September 2003, 23:32 »
As a child I was neglected,
Told I sucked and then rejected,
So nowadays I wear all black,
And I have some depressing words etched on my back.
Like a mime my face is pale,
And through my lobes I've shoved some rails.
I'm a masochist and a poser,
I act like I want to be run over by a bulldozer,
But inside I'm just as scared,
As Mickey Mouse or Subway's Jared,
Of death and all those nasty things,
Like getting stabbed or shot or reemed.
When it comes down to it all I want is attention,
That's why I'm always stuck in detention.
In my own group I hang all day,
While all the jocks laugh our way,
It seems as well that the nerds are above us,
Because we don't want anyone to love us.
So when you see us in our darkened gloom,
Or uttering words of dire doom,
Just remember we're just like you,
Except we look like we have the flu.

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« Reply #5 on: 17 September 2003, 07:35 »
Ode to Hot Topic

O Hot Topic Hot Topic let me in,
Share with me your t-shirts and doodads that spin,
Things so uncool and out of date,
They make gothic people want to mate.
I walk down the cramped isles,
Making sure not to smile,
For creatures with nose rings and spiked hair lurk about,
Giving me Satanic expressions and making my doubt,
That I'll make it out of this strip mall today,
My car is parked fifty spaces away.
But some how I made it,
Along with all of my stuff,
And I still managed to look quite badass and tough.

[ September 16, 2003: Message edited by: Macman ]