i liked the song and video in essence, but i think it would be nicer if it was more kick ass, maybe not more rock, but more psychedelic anyway. it should cut loose in the middle and have a nice long guitar solo, and it should have more drums, and they should stop sounding like there's somebody next door that they don't want to wake up. Also, i would change the melody slightyl, but what am i talking about? i don't have a band! it's good stuff as far as it goes! thanks for posting it, tux.